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Amelia's Independent Writing from Nikki Brass on Vimeo.
Hello AmeliaI love that piece of writing, apart from the part when you were sad no one should be sad,But other then that AMAZING storyFrom NaomiRm 10(I just have one question, where where you lost?)
Hi AmeliaThat was an amazing story i hope i can here more from you in the future it was very descriptive.From LiamRm 10
Love you smile to Mummy. Go Amelia!Love Jane
Hi Amelia, Wow your independent writing was amazing, it was descriptive and interesting thank you for sharing. From Kalia and Daisy.
Hello Amelia
ReplyDeleteI love that piece of writing, apart from the part when you were sad no one should be sad,
But other then that AMAZING story
From Naomi
Rm 10
(I just have one question, where where you lost?)
Hi Amelia
ReplyDeleteThat was an amazing story i hope i can here more from you in the future it was very descriptive.
From Liam
Rm 10
Love you smile to Mummy. Go Amelia!
ReplyDeleteLove Jane
Hi Amelia,
ReplyDeleteWow your independent writing was amazing, it was descriptive and interesting thank you for sharing.
From Kalia and Daisy.